Good efforts on this video! I believe that the way you present the effects as they are all very organised and I learnt more about the side effects of this video such as the abortal would have a smaller chance of conceiving. However, I think you can improve this video by taking it in a brighter place, as the video looks very dark and the face is not very clear. This colour effect of the video may make the audience feel that the video is very dull, and the attention of the audience may not be captured well. I suggest that you can take a picture such that your face looks brighter than the background in order to create a contrast which captures the attention of the audience better. Good for you on trying to maintain eye contact throughout the whole video. Keep it up!